In some countries, teenagers have jobs while they are still students. Some people think it is a brilliant idea and brings a lot of benefits to young students; others, however, deny. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Performing a

job

while

having

education

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has become a matter of debate, among people. A section of society believes that it has manyfold merits

whereas

some

disagrees

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.

This

essay shall explicate both viewpoints before

approching

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approaching

an opinion in the subsequent paragraphs. To initiate with, having

job

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a job

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along with

study provides

an

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exposure to practicality. As they get

in hand

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in-hand

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experience

of

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doing a particular

job

that makes them an expert in their field,their focus

shifs

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shifts

shift

from

theoratical

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theoretical

to practical and they are likely to get more success in their career. To exemplify, A friend of mine did a

part

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part-time

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time

course with

job

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the job

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and till the

time

his course completed, he was specialized in it .

Moreover

,

teenegers

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teenagers

learn the value of money. The

extravagent

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extravagant

behaviour of teens is much

common

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however

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,however

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,

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when they start earning

by

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on

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their own,they prioritize their needs and understand that money is hard to earn .

On the other hand

, working

while

studying create some troubles as well. Those students have to balance both

the

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education and work which is quite tough. They have to be accountable for both,which gives birth to some health issues

such

as stress and sometimes, even they become a victim of depression.

Also

,It is a cause of isolation from family members. Pupils do not have enough

time

to spend with family

due to

hard

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timetable

consequently

, their relations with others fade.

Therefore

, mental and social health has to face when managing two things together.

To conclude

,

Although

there are opportunities for early success in choosing

job

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a job

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with learning , yet in my opinion, teens ought to perform one task at a

time

and they should concentrate on completing their

study

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studies

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first and

then

choose a

job

and focus on building their career.