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Some people believe that for successful education you need a good teacher while others believe that it depends more upon the attitude of the student. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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Education
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 has been the centre of attention for the past centuries. It is said to be the key to success in life. Some people think that learning would only be successful by having a good educator
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 others are saying that it depends mainly on the student. In my opinion, having good
teachers
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 would mean
high
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 standard of
education
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. In order for a
school
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 to run, it needs a teacher that has high-quality teaching. They are the main reason why a
school
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 is becoming well known for its academic excellence.
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, having excellent educators would mean providing
students
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 with quality information so that
students
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 would graduate with flying colours. In the Philippines,
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, there is a
school
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 that only hires
teachers
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 that graduated from university with Latin honours. In
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 way, they know that they have the top proctors to disseminate their knowledge to
students
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.
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,
teachers
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 are the main source of learning in
school
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. Without the
teachers
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,
students
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 will be like blank pages.
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, in a math class, without the
teachers
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,
students
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 will be obliged to solve a math problem on their own. They would not know if their understanding of the problems and solutions is correct or not.
Teachers
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 could guide
students
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 on the easiest way to solve problems and
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 provide strategies to answer them.
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, there are people who think that a successful
education
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 would mainly depend on the attitude of the pupil. It does really need the cooperation of
students
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 in order for studying to be of quality. Having a top teacher is meaningless if the student is not participating or focusing on his studies. To illustrate, a pupil
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 being taught by prestigious educators is meaningless if the student is uninterested in it. No matter what information the proctor gives, it will be useless. To summarize, an
education
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 would on be considered successful if both the
teachers
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 and the
students
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 are working side-by-side. The teacher should be giving
high-qualityinformation
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high-quality information
 to
students
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 and the pupils should be concentrating on what their proctors are teaching them.
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, for me,
teachers
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 will still be the main reason for the success of the
school
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 as without them, no information will be given to
students
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.
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