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The chart and graph below giove information about sales and share prices for coca cola. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and male comparisons where relevant.

The chart and graph below giove information about sales and share prices for coca cola. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and male comparisons where relevant.
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The pie chart illustrates the data about the total purchases in the percentage of Coca-cola in five regions of North
America
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, Latin
America
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, Europe, Africa and the Middle East, and Asia in 2000. The line chart represents the data about the
share
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 price in dollars from 1996 to 2001.
Overall
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,
sales
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 of Coca-Cola in North
America
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 and Latin have large volumes of
sales
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 when compared to Europe and Asia,
while
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 Africa and the Middle East make the least volume of
sales
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. In terms of
share
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 price, there was a steady increase at the start and
then
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, fluctuation happened throughout the years. North
America
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 and Latin
America
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 represent a large chunk of Coca-Cola
sales
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 at 30.4% and 25.7% respectively. The rest of the
sales
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 volume is held by Europe at 20.5% and Asia at 16.4%. The least
sales
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 volume of 7% is held by Africa and the Middle East. In 1996
share
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 prices was steadily increasing from over $30 to under $70 in 1997.
Then
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, there were slight changes in mid-1997 were
share
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 prices fell to around $54. Followed by a sharp increase of above $70 in 1998. In the
last
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 quarter of 1998
share
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 prices slowly fell below $70 and continued to fluctuate up and down until 2001.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words america, share, sales with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "chart" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "represents" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "data" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "fell" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 2 times.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • sales trend
  • share prices
  • seasonal fluctuations
  • correlation
  • global events
  • market analysis
  • consumer behavior
  • economic factors
  • investment decisions
  • financial performance
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