The pie charts and table give information about the total value and sources of fish imported to the US between 1988 and 2000.

The pie charts and table give information about the total value and sources of fish imported to the US between 1988 and 2000.
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The table illustrates the average income from
fish
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import,
while
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the given pie charts depict the source percentage of
fish
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imported to the United States from 1988 to 2000.
Overall
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, in terms of revenue, there was significant growth during the period,
whereas
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Canada donated most of the
fish
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to the US compared to China and others from 1988 to 1992, except in 2000.
To begin
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with,
it is clear that
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the value of
fish
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imported in 1988 was just 6.57 billion dollars which increased slightly in the four following years to 8.52 billion dollars.
Furthermore
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, in the
last
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period, there was a slight rise in profit by 2.20 billion dollars.
Moreover
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, in terms of sources, in 1988, the highest country providing
fish
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to America was Canada, with exactly 60% followed by other authorities and China with approximately half (27%) and just 13% respectively.
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, the US got most
fish
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from other sources in 1992 with 46%;
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, in China, there was a grammatical increase to 20%. Meanwhile, in 2000, other sources still dominated in serving
fish
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imported to the US with 42%.
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, the other countries were just 30% and 28% respectively.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words fish with synonyms.
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