The two maps below show road access to a city hospital in 2007 and in 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The two maps below show road access to a city hospital in 2007 and in 2010.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The maps illustrate the ways that a city hospital can be entranced in the years 2007 and 2010.
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, it can be seen that in the first year, there were much fewer possibilities and in 2010 new structures were erected and the number of accesses increased. In the year 2007, the city's hospital entrance was through Ring
Road
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, entering from Hospital
Road
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and from the end of the car park, which was shared both by staff and the public (it was seated north of the City
Road
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) and There were six bus stops (three from each side of the Hospital
Road
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). All of the main streets were connected with crossroads. In the second pictured ,year there was a significant difference in the plan. There were now two car parks that entered Ring
Road
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: one at the same place as before, which was now only for the people, working in the building, and one, located to the north of the circling street. Public transport stops were now united into a bus station, positioned on the west of Hospital
Road
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. Two new roundabouts were built where crossroads were.
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Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
Vocabulary: Replace the words road with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • traffic flow
  • road access
  • ring road
  • bus stops
  • bus station
  • congestion
  • parking facilities
  • pedestrian crossings
  • vehicular flow
  • organizational structure
  • accessibility
  • enhancements
  • configuration
  • dedicated
  • diverting traffic
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