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Is the freedom of speech vital in a free society? agree or disagree

#freedom #speech #society
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 it is very important to know what
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freedom
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 of
speech
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 means.
Freedom
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 of
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 is
expression
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our
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 ideas and thoughts in
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 even with mass media. Some
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 say that
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 of
speech
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 is not too important in
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, because it is very hard to control it. Others say that it is vital for
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 so that ideas do not go unnoticed. I consider myself to
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people
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, so now I want to explain why does
freedom
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 of
speech
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 important in our life.
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, it is well
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known that
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 gave
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society
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 extra rights.
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 can say their own thoughts without any worry for their
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.
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 North Korea,
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 live in
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 country with no choice. They should think, speak and do the way
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states
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 wants it.
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freedom
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 of
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 contributes to the consolidating trust between
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 and respect for the opinions of others. Take
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 me and my mother. I can say anything to my mother and she is not critic me, because she respects my opinion and it strengthens our trust in each other. In conclusion, taking everything mentioned into account in our final analysis we can say that
freedom
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speech
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 very vital in
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society
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. But it is very important to understand that every plus has its minus, so
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 question may remain unanswered for many
people
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. But for
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this
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 question is closed.
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    • Sentence 2 - Detailed background statement
    • Sentence 3 - Thesis
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    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
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    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
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    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Freedom of speech
  • Democratic society
  • Marketplace of ideas
  • Dissenting opinions
  • Social progress
  • Innovation
  • Government accountability
  • Transparency
  • Good governance
  • Cultural development
  • Personal freedom
  • Self-realization
  • Public debate
  • Human rights
  • Liberties
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