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Topic: Some people say it’s a waste of time to plan for future. It’s more important to focus on present. Do you agree or disagree?

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Some people believe it is important to live in the present and give no heed or importance to the
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. I do not agree with
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 view because it is the thought of
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 prospects that gives an individual the growth
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 required in
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 through motivation and introspection. It is
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 crucial to live a purposeful
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 with minimal obstacles to deal with.
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 with, what is
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 without the hope of a better tomorrow?
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 is where planning for the
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 comes in. When an individual plans for the
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, a goal or dream to achieve they critically evaluate themselves making their shortcomings s apparent which leads to self-rectification and a first step towards becoming a better person and living a better
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 is taken.
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 , the
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 who has tunnel vision fixated on the present will not be able to see beyond current circumstances as they have nothing to achieve and
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 no growth is achieved. The other important benefit of holding a futuristic vision is that
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 develops a proactive approach to
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.
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, it makes the present more meaningful by giving it a purpose in the form of a dream or goal.
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, someone who has plans to study at a prestigious university in
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 for their master's would work hard
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 in the present to tick off the requirements that will be needed of them in
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.
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 inculcates the importance of timely hard work in
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 and challenges
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 to step out of their comfort zone which would be difficult to achieve if
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 is just engaged in the present
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, it can be seen that the qualities that
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 develops when
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plans
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 for the
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 are of great importance. From critical self-assessment to timely hard work and dedication the benefits
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 can reap are enormous and
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this
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 practice should be encouraged.
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