Some people feel that cities should allow for spaces for graffiti while others feel it should be banned. Discuss both sides and give your own opinion.
Most people agree that cities
shoud
give the right for Correct your spelling
should
graffiti
designer to show their skills in public spaces
, While
other
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others
not
prefer to allow that Add a missing verb
do not
types
of Fix the agreement mistake
type
arts
in the Fix the agreement mistake
art
streets
walls. Personally, I believe that cities should allow for Change the noun form
street
spaces
for graffiti
, I feel that for two reasons which i
will explore in the following essay.
I firmly believe thatChange the capitalization
I
,
the administrations Remove the comma
apply
that
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apply
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are responsable
responsable
for public Correct your spelling
responsible
spaces
should allow for spaces
for graffiti
,
because nowadays there are many talented Remove the comma
apply
boy's
and girls Change noun form
boys
are
very Correct pronoun usage
who are
obsess
Replace the word
obsessed
about
creating new ideas on the walls Change preposition
with
by
Change preposition
with
graffiti
, using different types
of colors
and words. Change the spelling
colours
For instance
, my sister Correct pronoun usage
apply
she
is a graphic designer but her speciality is Correct pronoun usage
apply
graffiti
, hence
, yesterday she draws
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drew
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apply
a
beautiful art on a wall of a big building and Correct article usage
apply
cause
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because
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of that
that
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of that
graffiti
she generates
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generated
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apply
a
thousands of dollars Correct article usage
apply
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and
plus
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and
of
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apply
that she
became renowned Correct pronoun usage
apply
Change preposition
for
by
her Change preposition
for
graffiti
design.
As a consequence
, In the new era most elderly people have a different thinking about graffiti
, such
as people who make that
design on the Correct determiner usage
apply
streets
walls are not respectful above Fix the agreement mistake
street
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apply
that
they don't have Correct word choice
apply
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apply
the
permission Correct article usage
apply
of practicing
those Change preposition
to practice
types
of activities, because it make
some cities roughly dirty. Change the verb form
makes
For example
, my father last
week found a
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apply
graffiti
on other
side of our home, he didn't like that Correct article usage
the other
in addition
he wrote a letter directly after that he went to the administration that Add a missing verb
is responsable
responsable
to our Correct your spelling
responsible
citity
if they can Correct your spelling
city
to
banne Change the verb form
apply
graffiti
definitely
.
In conclusion, Rephrase
apply
Personnally
, I prefer to allow Correct your spelling
personally
graffiti
widely,
because it Remove the comma
apply
give
more Change the verb form
gives
productivy
to the artistic generations who love Correct your spelling
productivity
productive
graffiti
and give
Change the verb form
gives
him
as much as we can Correct pronoun usage
them
for showing
these Change preposition
to show
types
of skills, I strongly believe that are
supporting my point of view.Change the verb form
is
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