You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The pie chart shows the percentage of persons arrested in the five years ending 1994 and the bar chart shows the most recent reasons for arrest. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.
The pie charts reveal
the
information about Correct article usage
apply
arresting
which is represented by the proportion from 1989 to 1994 by Replace the word
arrests
genders
, Fix the agreement mistake
gender
while
the bar graph illustrates the most updated reasons of arrested
in percentage which are Change preposition
for arrests
drink
driving, public drinking, breach of Replace the word
drunk
order
, assault, theft, other reason and no answer.
Add an article
the order
an order
Overall
,the majority of people in
five years until 1994 who Change preposition
apply
have done
Wrong verb form
were
the
illegalities Correct article usage
apply
was
found in masculine Change the verb form
were
by
32% which Change preposition
apply
more
than Add a missing verb
is more
one fourth
of all men, Add a hyphen
one-fourth
while
one in every ten of feminine (9%) did those things. However
, the
public drinking was the largest number of committed causes, which has Correct article usage
apply
reported
in both genders.
Even though the offender was much less common than those who were not arrested, in Add a missing verb
been reported
this
case, men were 23% more likely to be searched. They usually drank in public areas and drove after had dunk, which were
more than 25% in cases if compared with others. Change the verb form
was
While
the maximum of the most recent arrest
was Fix the agreement mistake
arrests
fond
in women who had been drinking in public spaces more Correct your spelling
found
frequent
up to 38% approximately, the assault and other Change the word
frequently
reason
were only 19% and 18% respectively. Fix the agreement mistake
reasons
However
there Add a comma
However,
was
a few offenders Correct subject-verb agreement
were
in
both men and women had not revealed the information.Change preposition
apply
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