These days, it is easier than ever for people to travel to different places. As a result, many locations that used to be free of tourists have now become popular tourist destinations. Do you feel this is a positive or negative development? Give reasons for your answers and include any relevant examples from your own experience or knowledge. Write at least 250 words.

Nowadays, people are keen to explore different new

attractions

when travelling, and places

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were relatively unpopular before have become new

attractions

.

This

is a positive development which can lead

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local economic interests, helping to promote cultural history, and bringing about diversified cultural exchanges. Expanding tourism could generate economic benefits for local communities,

this

includes creating jobs in different industries

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and increasing business opportunities.

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, as the number of travellers grew, the demand for hotels, visitor centres and other types of accommodation has

also

increased.

This

may raise revenue for local governments through taxation and consumption.

Moreover

,

tourists

gain a deeper understanding of local culture by learning about natural landforms and cultural relics.

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, there are many walled villages with a long history in the New Territories of Hong Kong,

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villagers have always retained traditional architecture and custom culture. Meanwhile, Hong Kong

also

has natural geological parks, and there are many special rocks worthy of becoming new tourist

attractions

.

This

can lead to conservation efforts and better management of the area, which contributes significantly to the development of local tourism.

Tourists

can

also

create a more diverse cultural environment for the community

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because they bring new ideas, cultural practices and different perspectives,

tourists

and local people can learn from each other,

For example

, Hong Kong actively organizes art exhibitions

such

as “Affordable Art Fair” every year, attracting

tourists

to come and participate. That can enhance local culture and lead to a more open and accepting society. Even

tourists

may cause overcrowding of different

attractions

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traffic congestion, but their positive impact on the economy, traditional history and multiculturalism cannot be ignored. And no doubt that these tourism activities will have a continuous positive impact on society in the future.