The two maps below show an island, before and after the construction of some tourist facilities.
The given two maps illustrate an island before and after the establishment of some tourist attractions.
As a whole,the area witnessed apply major developments,
such
as quite a few accommodations , a reception and a restaurant. Moreover
,they built other facilities for visitors.
On the western part,there are some accommodations which are surrounded by footpaths.There is a coconut tree in the middle of them.The beach which is near the ocean provides visitors to swim.Additionally
,the northern part has a restaurant .The reception is located at
below the restaurant ,and connected by a vehicle track.
When it comes to the eastern more guest houses are constructed and Change preposition
apply
also
connected by footpaths .In
addition
there is a pier that connects the island and the ocean on the south.Water transportations services go there,Add a comma
,addition
fortunately
the trees remained on the island despite the major developments that happenedAdd a comma
,fortunately
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