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in modern times, social media addiction is wrecking havoc on lives of people. What is the cause of this problem and how will you tackle it?

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Nowadays,
people
 always playing social
media
 in everywhere. There are excessive addictions to open and cause disaster in the lives of
people
. In
this
 essay, I assume there are many problems that can cause after many times using social
media
such
 as Facebook, Instagram, Twitter, etc. Social
media
 have many advantages if we use it correctly. But, in recent times, there are many abusive habits that we do not tolerate like scams, phishing, hacking, etc.
For example
, in Indonesia, we can meet scammers that made fake voices to worry other
people
. If the target is easily hypnotized, the users can lie to many crimes to take money as much as they can. The operation can be succeeded if they fulfil any needs and the victim is really sad and devastated. There are many consequences to prevent
this
 matter. Any government area
such
 as police, corps, and government must tackle it together to lower the crime and the damage.
For instance
, the government of Indonesia give an invest so big in State Cyber and Code Agency (BSSN) to prevent many crimes in the future. A community can report the havoc to authorities. So, the authority can be made any excuse for every bandit. If
this
 project can make it right, many problems will be solved and crime will be decreased very strongly. In a nutshell, social
media
 addiction can be prevented by working together to prevent it. Any stakeholders must care about
this
 cause to decrease crime and make
people
 happier, especially in Indonesia.
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