art should be unrestricted. DO you agree or disagree
Art has many forms namely music,dance,crafts, and acting.It must be encouraged among people.I completely agree with
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First of all, I believe that crafts should be popular in the nation.Because it provides relief and destroys all the worries of mankind.It helps to improve creativity and gives confidence .Correct determiner usage
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artistry should be part of life and the advantages of it outweigh the flaws.
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