The shown maps compare the condition of Sawry district between 1920 and 2020.

The two maps illustrate the

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prior to and following the development from 1920 to 2020.

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, There have been several significant changes in terms of replacement and construction

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of the renovation of the village of

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district

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over the years. Turning to the details. In 1920. One of the biggest changes in

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district

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is Tulebrug Bros.Canney is located northwest in the

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. Namely in

2020

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these places replaced Yang's office. Complex, Prestwich Primary School is situated southwest in a

district

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. But in 2020

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place was replaced by Lonoco Petrol station. There was a tree house in the northeast of the

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district

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. And in 2020 because of the built bridge, one house was demolished and House had been lies at the bottom of the houses.

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, Now developed an apartment in

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place. In 2020, Many houses, apartments and shops are located southeast in the

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By contrast

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This

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place had not been developed in 1920 . There have been many junipers in the southeast

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. By 2020. These junipers have been cut down in half part and Prestwich Primary

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has been erected into other half parts.

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Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

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Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

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The shown maps compare the condition of Sawry district between 1920 and 2020.

Some people believe that it is best to accept a bad situation, such as an unsatisfactory job or shortage of money. Others argue that it is better to try and improve such situations. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Some people believe that it is better language students in small classes, others think the number of people in the classes doesn't matter.

TOPIC: DO YOU THINK EXAMS ARE A GOOD WAY TO TEST STUDENTS?

The large amount of time and money that is spent on conserving wildlife would be better spent on improving the lives of humans. To what extent do you agree or disagree

Scientific developments in farming always bring major benefits. To what extent do you agree or disagree??