Describe some of the problems that overpopulation causes, and suggest at least one possible solution.
The widespread problem of overpopulation has long been a major topic of social concern.
This
essay will discuss what issues it may cause and how to tackle with
them.
The first obstacle which an increasing number of Change preposition
apply
people
may lead to is huge queues in facilities such
as hospital
, Fix the agreement mistake
hospitals
cinema
, Fix the agreement mistake
cinemas
shops
. Correct word choice
and shops
In
Change preposition
As
result
, individuals will not only lose their time waiting their turn but Correct article usage
a result
also
receive a bad service. To illustrate, when there are a huge number of people
are expecting what they looking for it is hard for workers to focus on someone and advise or help them as well. To solve this
inconvenience, all the mentioned amenities must provide more
queue management system. Correct article usage
a more
People
will arrive at agreed
time and not get annoyed. I believe that Add an article
the agreed
an agreed
by
the advancement of Change preposition
with
Fix the agreement mistake
technology
technologies
it is Add a comma
,technologies
quiet
possible Correct your spelling
quite
prevent
society from waiting in lines totally.
A Fix the infinitive
to prevent
further
issue relates to marine pollution. In other words
, many prefer traveling
to places where they can get rid of the noise of transports, make a shelter, cook and swim. Rarely do Change the spelling
travelling
people
realize that afterwards
it is important to collect all the Add a comma
,afterwards
litters
and throw Fix the agreement mistake
litter
Correct pronoun usage
it to
to
the trash bin in order to avoid pollution. Change preposition
in
For instance
, thousands of fish are dying because of the plastics people
leave in the ocean. The best way for dealing with it is to demonstrate it’s
possible consequences. Correct your spelling
its
Moreover
, inculcate adults and children how to protect the environment.
In conclusion, I believe that most of the problems overpopulation may have either cooperatively or individually can be mitigated.Submitted by berikkozha.eren on
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Answer the 'Problem and Solution' topic
Problem-and-solution essays fall naturally into two parts, the first describing and exploring the problem, the second setting out the solution or solutions.
You essay structure should look something like this:
- Introduction
- Body paragraph 1 – Problems
- Body paragraph 2 – Solutions
- Conclusion
Examples to start your body paragraph:
- One of the first problems of the...
- Another problem that needs to be considered...
- A possible solution to this problem would be...
- One immediate practical solution is to...