The government should pay for the college fees for everyone who wants to study at the University. To what extend do you agree or disagree.

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In recent years, whether the
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should pay for the
college
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fees
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for
students
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who would like to study at the
University
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has been in the spotlight of public attention
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that of the
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. With regard to
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matter, I am of the opinion that the
government
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should not pay
students
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the
college
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fees
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at the
University
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. In the following essay, the reasons for my argument will be elaborated. First of all, if the
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pay the
college
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tuition for
students
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who want to study their major, the
government
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will have
burden
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a burden
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about
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enormous
taxes
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.
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, if the author
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pays
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the
college
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fees
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at
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, the tax will be increased. It is a well-known fact that the
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also
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feel a sense of burden because of rising
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.
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,
according to
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recent research, when
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certain
governments
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provided
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college
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fees
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for
student
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students
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, the
taxes
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were doubled increasing.
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, the
citizens
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suffered from increasing
taxes
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to pay. That's why I can argue that the
government
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should not pay the
fees
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at
University
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. Another reason for my argument,
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that
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taxes
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should spend
for
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on
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citizens
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because most people pay
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taxes
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to live better
qualities
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quality
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lives.
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, if the
governments
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spend
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apply
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taxes
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to pay for
college
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tuitions
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tuition
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, many people will feel a sense of
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to the
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governments
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government
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.
Furthermore
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, people who need help cannot be offered welfare since the
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spend a lot of money at the
University
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.
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,
according to
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recent a study, if the
governments
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make a policy that they pay
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college
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fees
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, 70% of the
citizens
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who suffered from their poverty increased life that
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more than suffered. Many experts have become concerned about
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serious problem.
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, I argue that the
governments
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should spend the tax
for
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on
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the
citizens
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. In conclusion, it is indisputable that there are a variety of opinions concerning
this
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matter. After careful consideration with that in mind, it can be concluded that the
government
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do not have to pay the
college
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fees
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for
students
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at
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due to
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the
discussed
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above.
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