The government should pay for the college fees for everyone who wants to study at the University. To what extend do you agree or disagree.

In recent years, whether the
government
should pay for the
college
fees
for
students
who would like to study at the
University
has been in the spotlight of public attention
as well as
that of the
government
. With regard to
this
matter, I am of the opinion that the
government
should not pay
students
the
college
fees
at the
University
. In the following essay, the reasons for my argument will be elaborated. First of all, if the
government
pay the
college
tuition for
students
who want to study their major, the
government
will have
burden
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about
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enormous
taxes
.
In addition
, if the author
pay
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the
college
fees
at
University
, the tax will be increased. It is a well-known fact that the
citizens
also
feel a sense of burden because of rising
taxes
.
For example
,
according to
recent research, when
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certain
governments
provided
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college
fees
for
student
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students
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, the
taxes
were doubled increasing.
Therefore
, the
citizens
suffered from increasing
taxes
to pay. That's why I can argue that the
government
should not pay the
fees
at
University
. Another reason for my argument,
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the
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that
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taxes
should spend
for
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on
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citizens
because most people pay
the
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taxes
to live better
qualities
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quality
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lives.
However
, if the
governments
spend
the
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taxes
to pay for
college
tuitions
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tuition
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, many people will feel a sense of
unfair
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to the
governments
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government
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.
Furthermore
, people who need help cannot be offered welfare since the
governments
spend a lot of money at the
University
.
For instance
,
according to
recent a study, if the
governments
make a policy that they pay
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college
fees
, 70% of the
citizens
who suffered from their poverty increased life that
be
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more than suffered. Many experts have become concerned about
this
serious problem.
As a result
, I argue that the
governments
should spend the tax
for
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on
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the
citizens
. In conclusion, it is indisputable that there are a variety of opinions concerning
this
matter. After careful consideration with that in mind, it can be concluded that the
government
do not have to pay the
college
fees
for
students
at
University
due to
the
discussed
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above.
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