Write a letter to your friend asking him or her to take care of your childern while you are away on a business trip. In your letter, Write what they like to eat . Write how they would spend their time. Suggest an arrangement to pick them up after the trip.

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Dear Joe, I am writing to request you to look after my children for the coming weekend as I have a crucial presentation to showcase in Dubai and would really appreciate your help

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I'm away on a business trip. I plan to drop them off at your place sometime Friday evening. As you are aware, both my children are young and they like feasting on fast food.

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, please don't give in to their requests and prepare them only home-cooked meals; do add some substantial amount of vegetables to their plates. They are used to having a glass of milkshake every evening and are especially fond of banana shakes. They already have a busy schedule from morning till evening. The school bus picks them up at 8 in the morning, so they would need to be ready by 7:45AM and drop them back at 3PM in the afternoon. After that, they have tennis and dance classes till 6PM,

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you get the chance to be their favourite uncle. I'm planning to be back by Monday morning since my flight arrives and I should be at your place to pick them up post that. I really appreciate your help and do know that

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might be of short notice. Best wishes, John

Leena KapoorSat Mar 23 2024

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coherence cohesion

The letter is well-structured with a clear introduction, body, and conclusion, making it easy to follow. However, try to ensure that each paragraph focuses on a single idea more distinctly for improved clarity.

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You've successfully addressed all parts of the task with relevant details and an appropriate writing tone. For an even more complete response, consider adding a bit more detail about the children's preferences for meals and activities, as well as specific instructions for emergencies.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 8.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 8.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 8.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

8 paragraphs

213 words

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Do you agree or disagree with the following statement: People should sometimes do things that they donot enjoy doing. Use specific reasons and details to support your answer

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