Write a letter to your friend asking him or her to take care of your childern while you are away on a business trip. In your letter, Write what they like to eat . Write how they would spend their time. Suggest an arrangement to pick them up after the trip.
Dear Joe,
I am writing to request you to look after my children for the coming weekend as I have a crucial presentation to showcase in Dubai and would really appreciate your help
while
I'm away on a business trip. I plan to drop them off at your place sometime Friday evening.
As you are aware, both my children are young and they like feasting on fast food. However
, please don't give in to their requests and prepare them only home-cooked meals; do add some substantial amount of vegetables to their plates. They are used to having a glass of milkshake every evening and are especially fond of banana shakes.
They already have a busy schedule from morning till evening. The school bus picks them up at 8 in the morning, so they would need to be ready by 7:45AM and drop them back at 3PM in the afternoon. After that, they have tennis and dance classes till 6PM, post that
you get the chance to be their favourite uncle.
I'm planning to be back by Monday morning since my flight arrives and I should be at your place to pick them up post that.
I really appreciate your help and do know that Verb problem
after which
this
might be of short notice.
Best wishes,
JohnSubmitted by Leena Kapoor on
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coherence cohesion
The letter is well-structured with a clear introduction, body, and conclusion, making it easy to follow. However, try to ensure that each paragraph focuses on a single idea more distinctly for improved clarity.
task achievement
You've successfully addressed all parts of the task with relevant details and an appropriate writing tone. For an even more complete response, consider adding a bit more detail about the children's preferences for meals and activities, as well as specific instructions for emergencies.
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