You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. Your friend is thinking about learning to drive and would like some advice. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter • say why a driving licence is advantageous • recommend a driving school • give any extra guidance/tips

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Dear Max, I hope you're well mate! I received your letter

last

week and I'm writing back to tell you the many benefits that come with having a driver's license. The one of many pros is the freedom you get by having your own license. You wouldn't need your mom to drive you to the academy or to our meet-ups.

Hence

, you'll be able to leave the house whenever you want. To learn to drive, I'd highly suggest you join the 'Prime Motors' driving school because they're the best in town and government-approved as well. With

this

school, you'll get your license within 4 weeks of applying. My personal recommendation is to take your mom's car for practice lessons as you already have some experience of driving it.

Moreover

, if I were you, I'd definitely watch the 'Fast Moves' lesson videos on Youtube to learn about traffic rules and regulations. Since you haven't booked your theory test, I advise you to do it as soon as possible but don't pay in advance for it as you can pay altogether after your practical exam. That's all from my side. Feel free to ask more if you've any concerns. Happy to help always! Warm wishes, Akshita

Submitted by parasherakshita123 on Tue Jun 13 2023

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