The maps below show how a coastal town developed between 1950 and 2007.
The maps below given illustrates, the before and after of a coastal
town
, it is proposed redevelopment. During the period from 1950 to 2007.
Overall
, the comparison of the two maps, reveals a complete transformation, from a less rural area
into a more urban area
.
In 1950, the town
was greener with a lot of grasslands in the east part of the map. There was a road along the town
from south to north and it ended to a sea. Moreover
, There was an industrial area
just to the northwest of the map and also
, a car park
was located in the east part just above the grassland.
To contrast, The town
saw significant changes during a period of 57 years. The grasslands were completely removed and replaced by an entertainment area
in the south. In the northwest of the map, the Industrial area
was transformed into a multi-story car park
, a swimming pool, and a park
.
Therefore
, the sea was just developed after the yacht marina was added. Also
, a residential area
was installed after the car park
was demolished.Submitted by parianabiloo78 on
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