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Being a celebrity such as a famous film star or sports personality brings problems as well as benefits. Do you think that being a celebrity brings more benefits or more problems?

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Although
, being a celebrity brings some benefits but
along with
 these benefits they experience more difficulties in their
life
.
This
 essay will discuss why the problems they face are more than
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 advantages. There is no doubt that the
life
 they spend is full of luxuries, love, fame etc.
This
 is just because they earn at a high level by acting comma playing sports etc. So they can easily afford these items for themselves. But
on the other hand
, they face many difficulties in their personal
life
. Their
life
 becomes public property. And they are always chased by their fans because of their fame. As an example, if a famous film star is going out for lunch or for any task so they have to be very careful all the time
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 of
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 relax.
Secondly
, they get involved in taking drugs and alcoholic drinks. Because of the pressure of their work. As evidence, we can see all the Bollywood stars are drug and alcohol consumers.
In addition
, they cannot keep their personal matters a secret from the public. Because of being a celebrity they are monitored and photographed every time.
For instance
, we can take the example of the actress Malaika Arora, she has been divorced but her husband tried to keep that a secret but unfortunately, it did not remain. In conclusion, a famous film star and sports personality has a
life
 full of fame, luxuries, money etc. But these merits are comparatively very less than their problems or demerits.
This
 includes, their
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 public property and they cannot live their
life
 without tensions. Because of
this
, they get involved in drugs and unwanted or unethical habits of drinking alcoholic drinks.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Public scrutiny
  • Intrusive
  • Endorsements
  • Sponsorships
  • Financial security
  • High-profile collaborations
  • Social influence
  • Philanthropic efforts
  • Trust issues
  • Mental health challenges
  • Substance abuse
  • Pressures of celebrity
  • Expectations
  • Disconnect from reality
  • Normalcy
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