The bar chart below shows the popularity of well-known Instagram accounts in 2011 and 2021.

The bar chart below shows the popularity of well-known Instagram accounts in 2011 and 2021.
The bar chart gives some information about the popularity of Instagram accounts of famous Instagram users in one decade since 2011.     The bar sketch clearly shows the level of popularity of 5 very famous Instagram users who are famous in different fields for a period of 3 years, i.e. between 2018 and 2021.      From the bar table, it can be seen that in 2018, all celebrities have an average of 100 million followers, the most famous star was Selena Gomez, and the lowest result
according to
this
criterion was The Rock.      If we look at the statistics provided by the above blueprint, during the past 3 years, the number of followers of Cristiano Ronaldo who is considered the king of football, has trebled  just above from 100 to 300 (in millions) , and
this
is the highest result
furthermore
the above graph. The Rock, Ariana Grande and Kylie Jenner reached 250 million subscribers and recorded a similar result.
Although
it arrived at the vertex in 2018,
it is clear that
by 2021, Selena Gomez's followers had increased in popularity significantly slower than the rest, even well over 250 million.st
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