n some countries, young people are encouraged to work or travel for a year between finishing high school and starting university studies. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages for young people who decide to do this.

In my

opinion

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it has so

much

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advantages. First of

all

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you can get rest after your whole 12 years of education journey and you can clear your mind for

university

and you can go to some volunteering mission that

different

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is different

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from your main language, it builds confidence and reduces social anxiety for your

university

journey.

Secondly

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you can work much more for your branch and that gets you much more ahead of your classmates when you'

re

about to go to

university

. Some people want to follow their passion and that

gap

year

gives em' so huge a chance, they can build their business or what they want to do with their

carrier

without

university

stress.

Minority

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A minority

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of people

doesn't

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know what they'

re

going to build their

carrier

about and that

gap

year

gives

a

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them a

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huge chance too because they can find in

this

year

their passion or whatever they need

for

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the build their

carrier

about

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apply

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. Now it's time to get

in

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into

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my experiences,

while

i

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was educating

11th

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the 11th

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class

i

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I

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was in so

much

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many

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school projects that gave me so much experience

about

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with

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electronics and

electric

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. That gave me so

much advantage

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many advantages

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for

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ahead of my life,

carrier

and for my business. I'm talking to for who takes a

gap

year

they have to go into projects like

this

or tournaments and

they

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to

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build their mind about what they'

re

going to educate in

university

.

Lastly

,

i

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think there's no disadvantage

for

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to

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taking a

gap

year

except for one thing, you'

re

getting one age older before you'

re

ending your

university

it may

can

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be a problem if you'

re

not building yourself in

this

gap

year

but if you can build yourself it's not even a problem.