The chart below shows the changes that took place in three different areas of crime in New Port city center from 2003-2012. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The line chart illustrates the fluctuation of unlawful activity in the particular region in the mentioned 9 years.
Overall
, the number of burglaries after a slight rise, declined significantly. Although
the rate
of car theft and robbery from the person had some rising and falling during this
period, the rate
of them in 2012 stood equally near the number of them in 2003.
It is clear that
,
the highest Remove the comma
apply
rate
of criminal behaviour happened in 2004 by roughly 3800. Furthermore
was a sharp decline until 2008 and stood at just almost 1200. which did not have a noticeable variation until the end of the question.
According to
these statistics, the number of car theft incidents was the lowest rate
in 2006 about 2000 and then
it grew marginally until 2012 by nearly 2600. Moreover
, the amount of robbery from person did not have exceeded 1000 throughout this
period of question.Submitted by amirhsina on
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