The chart below shows the changes that took place in three different areas of crime in New Port city center from 2003-2012. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart below shows the changes that took place in three different areas of crime in New Port city center from 2003-2012.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The line chart illustrates the fluctuation of unlawful activity in the particular region in the mentioned 9 years.
Overall
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, the number of burglaries after a slight rise, declined significantly.
Although
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the
rate
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of car theft and robbery from the person had some rising and falling during
this
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period, the
rate
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of them in 2012 stood equally near the number of them in 2003.
It is clear that
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the highest
rate
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of criminal behaviour happened in 2004 by roughly 3800.
Furthermore
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was a sharp decline until 2008 and stood at just almost 1200. which did not have a noticeable variation until the end of the question.
According to
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these statistics, the number of car theft incidents was the lowest
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in 2006 about 2000 and
then
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it grew marginally until 2012 by nearly 2600.
Moreover
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, the amount of robbery from person did not have exceeded 1000 throughout
this
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period of question.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words rate with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "declined" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "stood" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • instances of crime
  • significant decline
  • noticeable change
  • fluctuating trend
  • relatively stable
  • minor fluctuations
  • dramatic reduction
  • converged towards
  • crime rate
  • time frame
  • notable trajectory
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