The chart below shows the changes that took place in three different areas of crime in New Port city center from 2003-2012. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The line chart illustrates the fluctuation of unlawful activity in the particular region in the mentioned 9 years.
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, the number of burglaries after a slight rise, declined significantly. Linking Words
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of car theft and robbery from the person had some rising and falling during Use synonyms
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of them in 2012 stood equally near the number of them in 2003.
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of criminal behaviour happened in 2004 by roughly 3800. Use synonyms
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was a sharp decline until 2008 and stood at just almost 1200. which did not have a noticeable variation until the end of the question.
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in 2006 about 2000 and Use synonyms
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it grew marginally until 2012 by nearly 2600. Linking Words
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, the amount of robbery from person did not have exceeded 1000 throughout Linking Words
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