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You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The plans below show how the ground floor of a particular building has changed over time. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words.

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The diagrams illustrate how the floorplan is changing in three different duration, in the years 1958, 1985, and present.
Overall
, the space is redesigned based on the core function of the building.
Moreover
, the kitchen remains the same in all durations. From 1958 to 1985, the building was designed as an office. Starting from the entrance, the lift
side
 was the toilet, and the right
side
 was the reception area.
Then
 towards the north, the largest area was the manager's office. The kitchen was located in the left upper corner. The meeting room was opposite to the kitchen.
Then
, towards the south. There were two offices for the assistant and secretary. From 1985 to 2000, the floor was reconstructed as an apartment. Two bedrooms on the right
side
. The living room was located at the upper left corner,
while
 the bathroom and shower were at the lower left corner. Recently, the floorplan was rebuilt to be a flower shop. Two regions are for the flower. The room for the gift cards is at the left end
side
 of the store.
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