In the past, when students did a university degree, they tended to study in their own country. Nowadays, they have more opportunity to study abroad. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this development?

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who like to continue their education
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would rather study in
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region. I personally assume the
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with a wide variety types
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in the best academic position.
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and live in the region with
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rate of amenities.
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university.
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, many commentators justifiably argue that there are some drawbacks when the
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are prone to depression because they are unable to adapt themselves
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culture and
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their problems.
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research from international
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, approximately 30% of pupils suffer from language
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especially, in the first five years of immigration. Personally, I do not find
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it seems to me governments can reduce their negative effects easily through consider enough entertainment facilities or suitable courses for international
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. In conclusion,
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think the merits of that are noticeable. The rise in communication and consumption of high-quality
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equipment are the chief positive aspects of them.
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