The two pie charts and the table below inform us on the budget used for police forces in the year 2017 and 2018 in the area of Britain.The table tells us how the money was collected and the charts show what it was spent on.

The two pie charts and the table below inform us on the budget used for police forces in the year 2017 and 2018 in the area of Britain.The table tells us how the money was collected and the charts show what it was spent on.
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As we can see on the table,the place where the money came from has not changed even though the amount of it has.The national government holds the first place at 175.5 and 177.5 million£ for two years in a row.Local taxes and other sources are in the second and third places on the chart.The fund that taxes provided was about 91 million in 2017,which was raised to 102 million the year after.The money that came from other sources did not change that much though,with only a small number of half a million compared to the other two mentioned. In 2017, three-quarters of the
budget
was invested in salaries and only one-fourth of it was spent on buildings,transport and
also
technology with the lowest
budget
of only 8 per
cent
.In 2018,the pie went through some changes in salaries and technology part
while
the
budget
for building and transportation remained still.The money that was for officers dropped a little making it 69 per
cent
and
on the contrary
,the decreased 6 per
cent
was added to the
budget
for technology making it 14 per
cent
.
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