Some people believe that professionals, such as doctors and engineers, should be required to work in the country where they did their training. Others believe they should be free to work in another country if they wish. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

It is often argued that nowadays high-skill professionals should work in their home
country
while
some people thought that if they have a chance, it is free to work
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country
where they want. In
this
essay, I will discuss both of them and give my honest opinion
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this
argument. On the one hand, serving their own nation is beneficial to
economy
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the economy
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and workforce of their nation. To put it another way, if they keep going
different
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to different
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place
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places
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, it will be
brain
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a brain
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drain
to
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that
country
. Doctors and engineers are
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the heart
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of human
resource
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resources
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, if they aren't enough,
shortage
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shortages
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will happen and
as a result
, citizens will go through hard
time
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times
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.
For instance
, developing countries in
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Asia,
such
as Mongolia,
Vietnam
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and Vietnam
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, their doctors are urging
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them to
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work another
country
in these days. Because they don't have enough salary to keep their life.
As a consequence
,
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a queue
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of hospital
appointment
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appointments
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is waiting at least 2 months
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at
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this
time. On the
another
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other
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hand, obtaining practice from different
place
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places
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would be helpful for individual development and career. To be exact,
some
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in some
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countries, namely Spain, their resident doctors
can nor
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cannot
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to hands-on
experienc
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experience
to
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with
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their patients, it restricts their developing ability, and experience.
In addition
, if they are offered
better
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a better
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environment of job and worthy income, they should take
this
opportunity for themselves, in the end, it is their life.
Moreover
, after working
long
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time, they can come
in
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their
country
as
a
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experienced professional who
have
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enough money and practice which will be
huge
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a huge
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benefit to
nation
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the nation
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. In conclusion, there
is
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two sides
of
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to
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working
different
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in different
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place where studied. In my point of view, working abroad will be helpful for
themselves
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them
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, even
their
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if their
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country
feels
shortage
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a shortage
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of them.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • professionals
  • doctors
  • engineers
  • required
  • training
  • home country
  • cultural
  • linguistic
  • advantages
  • economic impact
  • free
  • another country
  • globalization
  • international collaboration
  • improving
  • skills
  • knowledge
  • experience
  • opinion
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