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The table below gives information about the value (NZ$) of exports of kiwi fruit from New Zealand to five countries between 2010 and 2012.

The table below gives information about the value (NZ$) of exports of kiwi fruit from New Zealand to five countries between 2010 and 2012.
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The table illustrates Kiwi exportation from New Zealand to five countries including
Japan
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,
China
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, Mexico, Russia, and
Saudi
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Arabia
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 from 2010 to 2012.
Overall
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, the value of exports of kiwi from New Zealand to
Japan
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 was at most between 2010 and 2012,
while
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 these figures for
Saudi
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Arabia
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 were at least in the same period.
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,
Japan
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 consumed the highest amount of
kiwis
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 in 2012,
whereas
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Saudi
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Arabia
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 was the lowest consumed-kiwi country in the same year. In 2010,
Japan
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 spent
NZ
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$271.100.000 for the export of
kiwis
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 from New Zealand which was nearly four times that of
China
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. Meanwhile, imported
kiwis
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 in Mexico, Russia and
Saudi
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Arabia
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 were much less than
Japan
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 and
China
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 by
NZ
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$6 million,
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$968000 and
NZ
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$290000 respectively.
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, in 2011,
China
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 and
Japan
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 were continuously 2 countries having the highest value of imported
kiwis
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 and the figures even marginally increased.
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, that of Mexico and
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Arabia
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 plummeted by
NZ
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$2.400.000 and
NZ
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$106.000,
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, there was a remarkable rise in Russia to
NZ
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$2.404.000.
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, in 2012, except for
Saudi
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Arabia
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 , the rest of the four countries rocketed in Kiwi imports in the period of 3 years.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words japan, china, saudi, arabia, kiwis, nz with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "figures" was used 2 times.
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