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You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. Some members of your city council want to prohibit cars on several downtown streets. This will allow pedestrians and bicyclists to use the roads freely. Write a letter to a city council official in your city. In your letter Explain how you heard about the plan Provide some possible effects of this plan Give your opinion about the plan

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Dear sir, I am writing
this
 letter regarding the downtown
street
 car
probihit
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probit
 plan.
Last
 night I watched the News
in
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 The Turbine channel in which they showed that some council members want to
banned
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 on cars on some downtown
street
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streets
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.
Firstly
 I agree that there are two schools
in
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on
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 Main
street
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Street
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. One of the
street
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 where
the
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they
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 want to prevent cars.
However
, there are
pletora
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 big Royal IT
offces
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offices
office
 after
main
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street
. Certainly, most of
staff
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 take
same
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the same
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 route to go offices.If
council
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the council
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 will stop the way, will make big
concers
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concerns
concern
 for local people.
Secondly
, There is one
sport
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 centre in carve
street
. If they will prevent the vehicle, it will
effects
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 the sports
centre
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 popularity. I recommend you rather than
probibits
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prohibits
prohibit
 the cars will have to widen the road size. And will make a
seperate
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separate
 lane for pedestrians and bicyclists.
Additionally
,will prevent the vehicle in
cretain
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certain
 hours of the
days
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day
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 especially busy school hours for the safety of children who generally came
by
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on
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walk
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a walk
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. I hope you will look forward
on
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to
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 these solutions Yours sincerely, Tania
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