You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. Some members of your city council want to prohibit cars on several downtown streets. This will allow pedestrians and bicyclists to use the roads freely. Write a letter to a city council official in your city. In your letter Explain how you heard about the plan Provide some possible effects of this plan Give your opinion about the plan

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Dear sir, I am writing

this

letter regarding the downtown

street

car

probihit

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probit

plan.

Last

night I watched the News

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The Turbine channel in which they showed that some council members want to

banned

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on cars on some downtown

street

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streets

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Firstly

I agree that there are two schools

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Main

street

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. One of the

street

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streets

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where

the

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they

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want to prevent cars.

However

, there are

pletora

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big Royal IT

offces

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offices

office

after

main

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street

. Certainly, most of

staff

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take

same

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route to go offices.If

council

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will stop the way, will make big

concers

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concerns

concern

for local people.

Secondly

, There is one

sport

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centre in carve

street

. If they will prevent the vehicle, it will

effects

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the sports

centre

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popularity. I recommend you rather than

probibits

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prohibits

prohibit

the cars will have to widen the road size. And will make a

seperate

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separate

lane for pedestrians and bicyclists.

Additionally

,will prevent the vehicle in

cretain

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certain

hours of the

days

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especially busy school hours for the safety of children who generally came

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walk

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a walk

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. I hope you will look forward

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these solutions Yours sincerely, Tania

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

6 paragraphs

178 words

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