Some countries achieve international sports by building specialised facilities to train top athletes, instead of providing sports facilities that everyone can use. Do you think this is positive or negative development? Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Sports become one of the activities that have been popular these days and

this

kind of activity must be supported by the

government

. There are some arguments that it is better to build specialised

facilities

for

athletes

even though citizens

also

need a place to

exercise

. I believe that anybody needs to be facilitated in their needs as being active by the

government

and

athletes

also

need to be supported. Each sport has different kinds of equipment that can help

athletes

develop which are needed for specialised buildings. There are several advantages if the country has a building or area

that is

specific for

athletes

. First of all, it can help them to grow and

exercise

. I believe that the occupation as an athlete is not only achieved by themself but the

government

also

has their part with

support

proper

facilities

. In South Korea, there is a big area dedicated to their national

athletes

which include a dorm, kitchen, dining hall and several building to

exercise

.

This

support

makes those

athletes

are being valued and feel supported.

On the other hand

, we cannot forget that

exercise

and being active are not only for

athletes

but for

everyone

, so

government

need to take care

everyone

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. Common areas have several pieces of equipment to help citizens active, it does not require expensive and extensive equipment for

athletes

but

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as long as can be used by

everyone

of all ages. There are some countries that already implement

this

, which are South Korea, Japan and Canada. Those countries built at least one common area in each housing complex so their citizen can use it every time they want and

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because it's near their houses.

To conclude

, I believe that we need to

support

athletes

to have proper

facilities

and help them to develop their skills.

However

, those

facilities

are not only for them but

everyone

and the

government

also

needs to

support

them with built common are that can be used by all

age

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.