The bar chart below gives information about the percentage of the population living in urban areas in the world and in different continents.
The bar chart provides information regarding the
number
of citizen
who are living in the city Change to a plural noun
citizens
in
six different continents (world, Change preposition
on
Africa
, Asia, Europe, Latin America
, North
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and North
America
) over an eighty-year period, between 1950 and 2030. Units are measured in percent
.
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per cent
Overall
, North America
had the largest percentage of population
in urban areas, Add an article
the population
while
Africa
had the least number
. In all countries, the percentage increased gradually and it is forecasted to reach its peak in the
2030.
With regards to the year 1950, Change the article
apply
Africa
had the lowest number
at only 15%, whereas
the highest percentage was North America
, which stood at more than 50%. As of 1950, the number
of people in the mentioned countries went up constantly with the highest increment was Africa
rose more than doubled, to just over 35%.
Turning to the future, in
2030 is forecasted to have the same trend, in which all the countries will experience an upward trend. North Change preposition
apply
America
will touch the highest point at more than 80% of population
, Add an article
the population
while
Africa
will get its highest number
, namely at just over 51%.Submitted by nadiasyifaa on
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