The bar chart below gives information about the percentage of the population living in urban areas in the world and in different continents.

IELTS Writing Task Chart for The bar chart below gives information about the percentage of the population living in urban areas in the world and in different continents.

The bar chart provides information regarding the

number

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citizen

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citizens

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who are living in the city

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six different continents (world,

Africa

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, Asia, Europe, Latin

America

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North

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and North

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America

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) over an eighty-year period, between 1950 and 2030. Units are measured in

percent

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per cent

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Overall

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, North

America

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had the largest percentage of

population

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the population

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in urban areas,

while

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Africa

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had the least

number

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. In all countries, the percentage increased gradually and it is forecasted to reach its peak in

the

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apply

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2030. With regards to the year 1950,

Africa

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had the lowest

number

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at only 15%,

whereas

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the highest percentage was North

America

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, which stood at more than 50%. As of 1950, the

number

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of people in the mentioned countries went up constantly with the highest increment was

Africa

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rose more than doubled, to just over 35%. Turning to the future,

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apply

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2030 is forecasted to have the same trend, in which all the countries will experience an upward trend. North

America

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will touch the highest point at more than 80% of

population

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the population

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while

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Africa

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will get its highest

number

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, namely at just over 51%.

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Jun 14, 2023

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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".

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Vocabulary: Replace the words number, africa, america with synonyms.

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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "information" in your introduction.

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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 2 times.

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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 3 times.

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Vocabulary: The word "trend" was used 2 times.

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Vocabulary: The word "just over" was used 2 times.

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Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
3
Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
8
Grammar mistakes
detected issues

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 8.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

180 words

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