Some people think that in order to continue improving the quality of high school education, students should be encouraged to evaluate and criticize their teachers. Others, however, believe that this would result in the loss of discipline for teachers. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Quality

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The quality

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of high school

education

become the most important problem in every country in the world. There are several inputs for

education

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the education

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ministry to improve,

one

of them is

make

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to make

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evaluation

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evaluations

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for

teachers

from their

student

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students

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.

However

,

this

solution can be subjective and not relevant for

the

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apply

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teachers

and

school

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schools

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.

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essay will explain

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the advantage

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advantage

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advantages

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and drawbacks of both sides.

Teachers

need to improve their skills of teaching and how they communicate with

students

,

however

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,however

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they do not know which aspect and subject

that

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apply

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need

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to be improved.

One

of the solutions is

evaluation

from

students

to

teachers

,

this

solution

not

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to criticize but to help growth's their instructor.

This

tool can be

one

of many steps in order to make better quality of

education

which

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in which

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the

students

also

can contribute and speak up their opinion.

On the other hand

,

this

evaluation

can be

boomerang

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a boomerang

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to

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for

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school

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the school

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because the

students

can be subjective to evaluate their teacher.

For example

, if the

students

do not like

one

particular

instructors

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instructor

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, they can give

bad

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a bad

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score to him/her which make the survey not reliable anymore.

Moreover

, they can be lost their respect for their

teachers

and feel like they are in control of their

education

. In

conclusions

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conclusion

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,

evaluation

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an evaluation

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survey can be

one

tools

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tool

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to improve

skills

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the skills

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of the

teachers

, but

this

step needs additional socialization to make it as objective as possible. Without those additional

step

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steps

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, the

teachers

can be lost their respect.