Nowadays,families are not as close as in the past and a lot of people have become used to this.why is this happening?do the advantages of this trend outweigh the drawbacks?
As time advances, family relationships
seems
to be more and more superficial. The bond between Correct subject-verb agreement
seem
people
in a family have
become very thin nowadays and the sad reality is that everyone gets used to it. The reason for Correct subject-verb agreement
has
this
phenomena
is the deep desire inside us Fix the agreement mistake
phenomenon
for
taking decisions independently by eliminating Change preposition
to
unnecessay
interference from close relatives. Analysing that it negatively impacts Correct your spelling
unnecessary
the
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apply
people
by severly
affecting their mental health, Correct your spelling
severely
nevertheless
on the otherside
, it Correct your spelling
other side
provide
the pleasure of independent life. I strongly Change the verb form
provides
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believe
beleive
that the negative sides always outweigh the positive ones
Surely, Correct your spelling
believe
nuclear
family offers many advantages. Add an article
the nuclear
Firstly
, many people
are attracted towards idea
of living with their children and spouse only because of the freedom of taking decisions in life. Mostly, in joint Add an article
the idea
families
the conflict of ideas between the younger and older generation often creates problems, which will get solved Add a comma
,families
being
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by being
far-away
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far away
Secondly
, with the advent of technology
there are ways for far-ones to be connected to their relatives. Add a comma
,technology
For example
, the facility of video calling anytime and anywhere provides a virtual feeling of together
, which Add a missing verb
being together
thus
keeps the bond active.
Certainly, this
practice has very complex disadvantages too. Clearly, children are the ones who suffer the most. In earlier days, children were surrounded by a number of persons to look after them which by now reduced
to only two, their mom and dad, Add a missing verb
is reduced
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who
on the other hand
often fails doing
so Change the verb form
to do
due to
their busy lives. As a result
, childhood trauma is no longer rare since the pleasure of having a shoulder to lean and
a gentle Change preposition
on and
forhead
kiss Correct your spelling
forehead
in
bad days is taken away from them. Change preposition
on
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focussing
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focusing
around
oneself often make Change preposition
on
people
self-centered
which Change the spelling
self-centred
on
the long run intensively Change preposition
in
affect
their mental health since the luxury of freely venting emotions with family members is lost. The effects of Correct subject-verb agreement
affects
such
drawbacks are very intense.
To conclude
, we must not forget the fact that human is a social animal. The mere comfort provides by staying away from family is unworth
considering the negative sides associated with it. But, modern Replace the word
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people
still blindly following
the trend fascinated by their near-sighted thoughts. It is Wrong verb form
follow
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to consider the long-term problems before taking the decision to move away with one's own family.Correct your spelling
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