The maps below show the village of Stoeford in 1930 and 2010.

The maps below show the village of Stoeford in 1930 and 2010.
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Stokeford, a village, is illustrated here on two maps, one showing it in 1930, and the latter in 2010.
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, the residential area had increased in size over the 80 years at the expense of losing all the rural farmland. River Stoke and the main road through the village, with their crossing bridge, had remained unchanged during the mentioned period. Four smaller roads, though, had been extracted from the main. The number of houses alongside the main and the extended roads was almost 5 times more
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than in the first year under study. Farmland, in the Northeast and Southwest, had completely disappeared. The post office still remained in its first place, yet, the nearest shops had been removed by the early 21st century. The primary school had been expanded by adding the building. The old-time gardens, on the East, had been replaced by retirement homes which were, in the
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year, connected to the main road by a newly made street.
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