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The charts shows air pollution levels by different causes among four countries in 2021. Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The charts shows air pollution levels by different causes among four countries in 2021. Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The bar chart represents the data of
air
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pollution
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 from three different countries in 2021 rooted in electricity generation, transport and industry Frankly speaking, China holds the highest
air
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pollution
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 followed by America, Japan and
Australia
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.
On the other hand
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,
Australia
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 gives reputable data as it holds the least
percentage
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 of
air
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pollution
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. Notably, the
percentage
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 of
air
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pollution
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 in China caused by Industry is exceedingly high than in other countries by 80%.
Next,
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transportation has
also
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 been a source of
air
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pollution
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 as its
percentage
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 is extremely high leaving other countries at 70%. As for electricity generation, China holds a
percentage
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 of 59% and America is 30% afterwards
along with
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Australia
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 and Japan.
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,
Australia
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 has set a standard by having the least
percentage
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 of
pollution
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 in those three causes below 20%.
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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Vocabulary: Replace the words air, pollution, australia, percentage with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "data" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 5 times.
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