The diagram shows the process by which milk and related product are produced
The process map illustrates the production of
milk
and its derivated goods. Use synonyms
Overall
, it is shown how to produce these items starting from the animal, an adult cow, to selling in a supermarket.
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To begin
with, it starts with the use of a milking machine, in Linking Words
fact
each animal is milked two times a day. The following part is the output refrigeration, where animal derivated is put in silos waiting for freezing temperatures. After that, frozen material is moved through the Add a comma
,fact
milk
tanker every day.
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The next step is
divided into two different processes, depending on which product will be made, in ,fact cheese, creams and derivates move differently from Linking Words
milk
.
The first items are created Use synonyms
at the end
of the dairy phase, and the process is done. Linking Words
On the other hand
, in a different ,way buttermilk is pasteurized and packaged in a production line. Linking Words
This
process ends with the bottles of Linking Words
milk
put in stores and supermarkets.Use synonyms
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