The diagram shows the process by which milk and related product are produced

The diagram shows the process by which milk and related product are produced
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The process map illustrates the production of
milk
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and its derivated goods.
Overall
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, it is shown how to produce these items starting from the animal, an adult cow, to selling in a supermarket.
To begin
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with, it starts with the use of a milking machine, in
fact
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each animal is milked two times a day. The following part is the output refrigeration, where animal derivated is put in silos waiting for freezing temperatures. After that, frozen material is moved through the
milk
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tanker every day.
The next step is
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divided into two different processes, depending on which product will be made, in ,fact cheese, creams and derivates move differently from
milk
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. The first items are created
at the end
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of the dairy phase, and the process is done.
On the other hand
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, in a different ,way buttermilk is pasteurized and packaged in a production line.
This
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process ends with the bottles of
milk
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put in stores and supermarkets.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words milk with synonyms.
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