The diagram shows the process by which milk and related product are produced
The process map illustrates the production of
milk
and its derivated goods. Overall
, it is shown how to produce these items starting from the animal, an adult cow, to selling in a supermarket.
To begin
with, it starts with the use of a milking machine, in fact
each animal is milked two times a day. The following part is the output refrigeration, where animal derivated is put in silos waiting for freezing temperatures. After that, frozen material is moved through the Add a comma
,fact
milk
tanker every day.
The next step is
divided into two different processes, depending on which product will be made, in ,fact cheese, creams and derivates move differently from milk
.
The first items are created at the end
of the dairy phase, and the process is done. On the other hand
, in a different ,way buttermilk is pasteurized and packaged in a production line. This
process ends with the bottles of milk
put in stores and supermarkets.Submitted by linda.marchetto on
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