The Table Below Shows the Results of Surveys in 2000, 2005 and 2010 About One University.
The table provides information regarding the
ratings
of one university, split by five different aspects
over a fifteen-year period
, from 2000 to 2010. Units are measured by percent
. Change the spelling
per cent
Overall
, the ratings
rose in all aspects
but two aspects
,
and were highest in Print Remove the comma
apply
Resources
.
It can be seen that most
significant Correct article usage
the most
ratings
87% was in Printing Fix the agreement mistake
rating
Resources
and slightly increased in 2005 before falling to 88% in the last
period
. The figure fo
Electronic Correct your spelling
for
Resources
originally
lower than that for Printing Add a missing verb
was originally
Resources
. However
, electronic resources
increased dramatically to 72 and reached the highest in 2010. Furthermore
, technical quality increased slightly in 2010 after falling in the previous five years.
Turning to two other aspects
, crystal clear that Range
of Modules offered had the lowest Correct article usage
the Range
ratings
from 2000 to 2010 which gradually decreased and reached its lowest point at 27% in last
Correct article usage
the last
period
. Regarding building/teaching facilities, it remained the same over the period
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