Many people prefer to watch foreign films than locally produced films. Why could this be? Should governments give more financial support to local film industries?

Nowadays it is true that lots of people tend to watch internationally produced movies rather than domestic films. From my point of view, there could be several reasons why
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, and
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the government has to support financially their nation's movie productions.
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production which is globally enjoyable and
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their movies.
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quality, high resolution and professional editing with their product.
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productions,
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Marvel,
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is hard to battle with these big companies. In the second place, they can hire top directors, writers and actors in their
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without budget
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. It enables to them take attraction from
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even before filming. To be exact,
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Avatar which is released in 2009, there was huge waiting from people about part 2. By 2022 they announced filming part two which was big news to all
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of
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I believe there is always
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director in any nation without enough
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for filming. To put it another way, the government should assist amateur
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film-makers
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who just need to prove themselves.
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more employment and
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development for that country if it really booms the film industry.
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, New Zealand was
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touristic
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attraction
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time. In conclusion, in order to
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big film industry, the government should support and help
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local producers more and more
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in their nation.
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  • Globalization
  • Cultural exchange
  • Cinematic expertise
  • Diverse narratives
  • Enriching cultural experience
  • Linguistic proficiency
  • Cinematography advancements
  • Government subsidies
  • Promote local talent
  • Economic sustainability
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