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Nowadays children watch much more television than they did in the past and spend less time being active or creative. What is the reason for this? What measures should be taken to encourage children to be more active?

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In modern times, minors tend to watch more television shows, play games, and entertainment than in the past.
In addition
, they spend most
time
 being inactive or uncreative. Looking from an
overall
 perspective, it has both pros and cons which I believe should be considered seriously. In the 1900s century,
although
 the smart devices, we use every single
day
 in our daily life, didn't appear, it was suitable for minors to grow up in an appropriate place. A study shows that a kid who lived in the previous
time
 is more intelligent than another because intelligence's blue screen is detrimental to the human brain's neuro system that important to understand some action to do.
In other words
, it becomes us more slowly. Internet technology has changed the world and it influenced children.
Furthermore
, it brought us an enormous opportunity to save
time
as well as
time
- management. The reason why children are becoming more and more undesirable to do anything is definitely gadgets.
For example
, I myself used to be a person that always tended to waste my all
day
 on the computer or a variety of machinery. From my point of view, the problem was related to the balance of work and life. At that
time
, the only chance to be an active individual was to realize our mistakes. Even though minors waste their
time
 on non-useful actions, they develop their ability
day
 by
day
. In conclusion, maybe the only way to fix
this
 problem is for parents to supervise their children. If they can do that, everything will be better from now.
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