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somw people say that the only reason for learning a foreign language is in order to travel to or work in a forien country .others say that these are not the only reasons why someone should learn a foreign language . discuss both views and give your own opinion.

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Learning
languages
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 became the target of many individuals since
then
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 and now. There are several reasons why a person wants to learn a second and a third
language
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,
such
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 as going abroad or getting a job in another country and seeking a better life.
First,
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acquiring a new
language
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 is fun for some
people
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. Those who have
this
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 kind of hobby find that communicating using a completely different tongue is a way of having fun. Some others believe that learning a
language
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 is a must ,especially for those who work in the economic, health and business sectors because they have to deal with different kinds of
people
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 from all over the world.
Second,
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besides
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 travelling and working abroad the internet made it easy for many humans to exchange their thought with others on the other side of the planet.
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, working online. Nowadays
people
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 tend to work at home behind their screens to save money and time. For
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 ,reason learning
languages
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 give you many opportunities to find a relevant job in most developing countries.
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, Moving outside your country requires learning many
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.
For instance
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, If someone tended to immigrate to another state like Canada. He or She would pass a
language
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 Exam
such
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 as French or English or maybe both.
On the other hand
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, even though you are not willing to travel may some
people
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 from overseas wants your help and you aren't able to do so because you do not get a word.
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, There are several reasons why
people
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 should learn a new
language
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 or let me say two or three new
languages
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. As for me, I enjoy expressing myself differently by using new
languages
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. It's fun.
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