The chart shows British Emigration to selected destinations between 2004 and 2007.

The provided bar charts illustrate the top 5 destination countries from British immigration of international

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from 2004 to 2007.

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British mostly selected Australia as their destination among 5 countries over the four-year period, with approximately 40000 to 50000

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per year. In 2006, the

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to Australia reached its peak, with more than 50

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travelled to Spain remained relatively stable from 2004 to 2006 at around 35000 each year,

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dramatically dropped to just under 30000 in 2007

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in New Zealand

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remained constant during the period, at just above 20

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.

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to the United States of America and France fluctuated. In 2004 and 2006,

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around 25000

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travelled to the USA,

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in 2005 and 2007, only less than 20

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selected the USA as their destination country. In France, the

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of customers dramatically oscillated in the range from under 20

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to over 30

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each year.