The chart shows British Emigration to selected destinations between 2004 and 2007.
The provided bar charts illustrate the top 5 destination countries from British immigration of international
passengers
from 2004 to 2007.
To begin
with, Passengers
from
British mostly selected Australia as their destination among 5 countries over the four-year period, with approximately 40000 to 50000 Change preposition
in
passengers
per year. In 2006, the number
of passengers
travel
to Australia reached its peak, with more than 50 Wrong verb form
travelling
thousand
passengers
.
As for the survey result, The number
of passengers
travelled to Spain remained relatively stable from 2004 to 2006 at around 35000 each year, then
dramatically dropped to just under 30000 in 2007 while
a
Correct article usage
the
number
of passengers
arrived
in New Zealand Correct pronoun usage
who arrived
also
remained constant during the period, at just above 20 thousand
passengers
.
On the other hand
, passengers
travelled
to the United States of America and France fluctuated. In 2004 and 2006, Wrong verb form
travelling
at
around 25000 Change preposition
apply
passengers
travelled to the USA, whereas
in 2005 and 2007, only less than 20 thousand
passengers
selected the USA as their destination country. In France, the number
of customers dramatically oscillated in the range from under 20 thousand
to over 30 thousand
passengers
each year.Submitted by Partofyourworld on
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