The two maps below show an island, before and after the construction of some tourist facilities.
The provided maps illustrate the
island
before and after the tourist facilities developed.
The island
is approximately 250 meters long, with palm trees around it. The island
surrounded
by the sea and there is a small beach in the west. Over the period, the Add a missing verb
is surrounded
island
was completely transformed, and many buildings
were constructed to serve the tourist visitor. However
, the east part of the island
still has not been developed.
The most noticeable addition is the hotel
. There are 6 hotel
buildings
on the west part surrounding the palm trees while
the other 9 hotel
buildings
were built in the centre of the island
. Furthermore
, the reception and the restaurant were developed and located between the 2 sides of the hotel
buildings
. Meanwhile, the pier has also
been constructed near the south of the island
. As a result
, tourist is able to travel to island
by ship or boat. Add an article
the island
Although
the beach was remained
the same, its purpose is to be used for swimming.Change to the active voice
remained
has remained
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