The two maps below show an island, before and after the construction of some tourist facilities.

The two maps below show an island, before and after the construction of some tourist facilities.
The provided maps illustrate the
island
before and after the tourist facilities developed. The
island
is approximately 250 meters long, with palm trees around it. The
island
surrounded
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by the sea and there is a small beach in the west. Over the period, the
island
was completely transformed, and many
buildings
were constructed to serve the tourist visitor.
However
, the east part of the
island
still has not been developed. The most noticeable addition is the
hotel
. There are 6
hotel
buildings
on the west part surrounding the palm trees
while
the other 9
hotel
buildings
were built in the centre of the
island
.
Furthermore
, the reception and the restaurant were developed and located between the 2 sides of the
hotel
buildings
. Meanwhile, the pier has
also
been constructed near the south of the
island
.
As a result
, tourist is able to travel to
island
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the island
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by ship or boat.
Although
the beach
was remained
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the same, its purpose is to be used for swimming.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • island
  • before and after
  • construction
  • tourist facilities
  • maps
  • changes
  • comparison
  • description
  • implications
  • personal opinion
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