A person’s worth nowadays seems to be judged according to social status and material possessions. Old-fashioned values, such as honour, kindness and trust, no longer seem important. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?
In recent times, it is believed that moral characteristics
such
as honour,kindness and trust
have become less essential.Since humans are judged based on their status
and physical appearance.I completely agree with the latter notion ,but I do not think that moral values are less important
The primary reason is that nowadays in society humans are basically giving their opinions, by seeing the status
of the person.If a person has more wealth and if they are involved in any crime also
they will not punish them rather they will support them.For Instance
,mostly we see celebrities commit crimes for which they will not get punished because of their status
and the publicity they have.Furthermore
, people
will treated differently when using public transport.If the person is wealthy they will be prioritised and treated with the utmost respect.In contrast
,lower-class people
will left alone and neglected if they pay the same price.To illustrate,in many cultures lower income people
are not welcome.
I completely disagree that kindness and trust
have less importance in society.Moreover
, characteristics play a crucial role in human life. Additionally
,there are humans who sacrifice their lives for honesty. In fact, in the modern world ,these characteristics of people
are more welcome in the organization. For example
,there are many organizations that believe in honesty and trust
the successful achievements and in the same way they give rewards to their employees because of their kindness and trust
in their successful achievements.
In conclusion, Most people
will judge others according to
their status
and physical appearance rather than on their honesty and trust
.I believe that still moral values exist in society.Submitted by rani.reddy2003 on
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