A person’s worth nowadays seems to be judged according to social status and material possessions. Old-fashioned values, such as honour, kindness and trust, no longer seem important. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

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In recent times, it is believed that moral characteristics

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as honour,kindness and

trust

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have become less essential.Since humans are judged based on their

status

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and physical appearance.I completely agree with the latter notion ,but I do not think that moral values are less important The primary reason is that nowadays in society humans are basically giving their opinions, by seeing the

status

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of the person.If a person has more wealth and if they are involved in any crime

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they will not punish them rather they will support them.

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,mostly we see celebrities commit crimes for which they will not get punished because of their

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and the publicity they have.

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people

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will treated differently when using public transport.If the person is wealthy they will be prioritised and treated with the utmost respect.

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,lower-class

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will left alone and neglected if they pay the same price.To illustrate,in many cultures lower income

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are not welcome. I completely disagree that kindness and

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have less importance in society.

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, characteristics play a crucial role in human life.

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,there are humans who sacrifice their lives for honesty. In fact, in the modern world ,these characteristics of

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are more welcome in the organization.

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,there are many organizations that believe in honesty and

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the successful achievements and in the same way they give rewards to their employees because of their kindness and

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in their successful achievements. In conclusion, Most

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will judge others

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their

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and physical appearance rather than on their honesty and

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.I believe that still moral values exist in society.

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Topic Vocabulary:

Social status
Material possessions
Old-fashioned values
Honour
Kindness
Trust
Judged
Importance
Traditional
Reflection
Achievements
Hard work
Disregarded
Well-balanced
Meaningful
Cultural norms
Societal norms

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A person’s worth nowadays seems to be judged according to social status and material possessions. Old-fashioned values, such as honour, kindness and trust, no longer seem important. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

Some people think that schools are too competitive and that this has a negative impact on children. Others believe the competitive environment encourages children to achieve. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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Many goods including what we use on a daily basis produced by other countries need to be transported from a long distance. To what extent Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages

the amount of shops that closed and opened since 2011 until 2018.

How do you feel about the impact of technology on social isolation? Give some examples to support your view.