The graph below gives information about the percentage of population in four Asian countries living in cities from 1970 to 2020, with predictions for 2030 and 2040.
The line chart presents data about the
percentage
of the population
in the Philippines, Malaysia
, Thailand and Indonesia between 1970 and 2020. And also
give information for the next 20 years.
Overall
, the total percentage
of the population
increased throughout the given period. In addition
, Malaysia
is the leader with a percentage
of approximately 80 per cent.
In the beginning, the percentage
of the population
has increased in four Asian countries. However
, in , the Philippines the percentage
of people slightly decreased from 50 per cent to just over 40 between 1990 and 2010 and then
this
line gradually rise up.
Thailand maintains the same level from 1990 to 2020. Nonetheless
, at that time periodAdd a comma
,
Malaysia
was enormously increasing. In 1970 Indonesia was in last
place with percentages then
it rapidly increased and take second place with the amount of population
after Malaysia
. In addition
, If we compare Thailand and Malaysia
we can clearly see that there are extensive differences.Submitted by muharodnoy on
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