The graph below gives information about the percentage of population in four Asian countries living in cities from 1970 to 2020, with predictions for 2030 and 2040.

The graph below gives information about the percentage of population in four Asian countries living in cities from 1970 to 2020, with predictions for 2030 and 2040.
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The line chart presents data about the
percentage
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of the
population
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in the Philippines,
Malaysia
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, Thailand and Indonesia between 1970 and 2020. And
also
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give information for the next 20 years.
Overall
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, the total
percentage
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of the
population
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increased throughout the given period.
In addition
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,
Malaysia
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is the leader with a
percentage
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of approximately 80 per cent. In the beginning, the
percentage
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of the
population
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has increased in four Asian countries.
However
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, in , the Philippines the
percentage
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of people slightly decreased from 50 per cent to just over 40 between 1990 and 2010 and
then
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this
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line gradually rise up. Thailand maintains the same level from 1990 to 2020.
Nonetheless
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, at that time period
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Malaysia
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was enormously increasing. In 1970 Indonesia was in
last
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place with percentages
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it rapidly increased and take second place with the amount of
population
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after
Malaysia
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.
In addition
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, If we compare Thailand and
Malaysia
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we can clearly see that there are extensive differences.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "in addition".
Vocabulary: Replace the words percentage, population, malaysia with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "give" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 6 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 3 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • graph
  • percentage
  • population
  • Asian countries
  • living in cities
  • 1970
  • 2020
  • predictions
  • 2030
  • 2040
  • introduction
  • overview
  • trend
  • body paragraph
  • compare
  • predicted percentages
  • summarize
  • closing statement
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