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Nowadays most people read books online and there is decline in number of people reading paperback books. What are the advantages and disadvantages

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people around the world prefer
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smartphones,
laptops
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and laptops
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 to check the
books
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physical
books
. First of all, the pros of reading
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books
 by using technological
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,
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 need to purchase them, since there are
alot
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a lot
 of websites they are
prividing
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providing
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the
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students prefer to get those
books
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internet
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 and read them directly on their smart
devices
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instead
 of
prnting
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printing
 them or pay part of their money to get them.
Secondly
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 we are unable to find the
books
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medical
books
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 and its so difficult for us to bring them as resources to be mentioned in our assignments,
that is
 why, we prefer to use the
internet
 and technological
devices
 to read and check on daily basis.
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 not reading from the
books
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flexibility
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sticking
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 and study, to illustrate, if the students did not hold their
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using their phones to play, chat, not only
this
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also
 time-consuming on social media.
furthermore
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books
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become not
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 generation nowadays are so
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, that made them only
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,
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people become
more
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familier
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familiar
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reading
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 by using
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devices
instead
 of
books
, and even forced to do so, since
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physical
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expensive
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 agree we have to
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books
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • digital library
  • e-reader
  • blue light
  • paper conservation
  • tactile interaction
  • memory retention
  • portability
  • collectible
  • eye comfort
  • sustainability
  • immersive experience
  • distractive technology
  • e-ink display
  • multimedia features
  • reading habits
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