Social media is gradually replacing in-person face-to-face contact with many people worldwide. Do the benefits of social media outweigh the disadvantages?

The modern era become well-known for the possibilities it provides for

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phones and social media are not excluded from

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list. It is claimed that

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interaction among

people

will be replaced by social media. In my ,opinion there are more advantages to social platforms giving us a chance to stay in touch worldwide,

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there are

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be ignored. On the one hand, social media apps

such

as Instagram, Snapchat and etc. give entryway to send voice messages and make calls.

Firstly

, by making calls in these apps you may have an opportunity to hide your face or cover it with filters which makes calls funnier

while

talking.

For instance

, when I talk with my friends on Snapchat we take screenshots of each other in weird poses.

Secondly

,

last

three years online education gained popularity since it differs from time-saving and teaching lessons in a convenient way.

On the other hand

, social platforms cannot always serve

people

in a good way. Essentially, meeting with

people

in person hits differently as it gives access to physical touch and emotional moments.

Furthermore

, sometimes

while

talking on

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phone with

people

in far-off places call can be tackled which disturb calls.

For example

, in our ,country it is impossible to contact the citizens of France

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since call line is prohibited between countries.

To conclude

, there is no barrier to communicating over distances with the help of applications,

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people

have to recognize the pros and cons it gives us.