The wealth gap between 1st world countries and 3rd world countries seems to be increasing. How can we reduce this gap? Do you think that developed countries have a duty to assist developing countries in every way?

It is certainly true that the

gap

between industrialized and poor

countries

is increase

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every single day. In my opinion, in order to reduce

this

gap

the developed

nations

should provide financial and physical

aids

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to poor

nations

, I believe the affluent

nations

have

ful

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full

responsibility to help the poor

nations

.

To begin

with, there are several ways can contribute to

minimize

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the

gap

between wealthy and poor

nations

.

Firstly

,

the

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rich

countries

can provide funds to support the economy of poor

countries

, which

this

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can help the governments in underdeveloped

countries

to make improvements in crucial infrastructure namely, healthcare,education,

roads

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.

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,

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developed

countries

can invest money in developing

countries

in long-term projects

such

as ,

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power plants,

school

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schools

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, hospitals,

public

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tranport

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transport

.

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,

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projects can provide jobs opportunity and income for local people, and

also

give them access to better services to enhance their quality of living .

In addition

, I strongly believe the affluent

nations

are responsible to assist the developing

nations

in different

method

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.

This

is because by helping

developing

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we can

prvide

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provide

healthy

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environment for all people worldwide .

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, if

the

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industrialized

nations

provide vaccines and medical equipment to fight illnesses

such

as

,

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Ebola, HIV,

malaria

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and malaria

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, which means

this

assist can prevent

spreading

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diseases

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around the world.

Additionally

, some

of

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developed

countries

like

,

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the UK,

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in the past was stealing

a

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natural

resrources

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resources

resource

of

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underdeveloped

nations

, and they should remove their mistakes by

help

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helping

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these

countries

.

To sum up

, the industrialized

countries

should provide

finanical

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financial

and physical

aids

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in order to reduce

this

gap

, I believe mandatory

to

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for

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affluents

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affluent

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nations

to help poor

nations

,

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because

help

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helping

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theses

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these

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countries

can provide

healthy

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a healthy

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environment for all individuals

global

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