You recently received a letter from a friend asking for advice whether to go to college or try to get a job. You think he/she should get a job Write a letter to this friend. In your letter •Say why he/she would not enjoy going college •Explain why getting a job is a good idea for him/her •Suggest the types of jobs that would be suitable for him/her

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Dear Raman, I'm writing to let you know that you should try to find a job as you should be independent and try to save some money for your own college fees. As with schools you have to go to college regularly and it's a kind of a boring thing.Colleges are extremely expensive and employers don't even ask for degrees.They give preference to practical experience over theory.that's why I think you should start looking for a job . I know you are struggling now because of your financial situation.
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the labour shortage,many companies are looking for the right candidates regardless of their qualifications;
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,I think you should give it a try. I suggest you apply for warehouse work namely IKEA and Amazon.The chances of getting raise in
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kind of work are pretty high.They
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give good incentives.I recently saw an advertisement by Amazon that they give experience to new candidates which could be beneficial in future when you will apply for a greater position in a good company. Yours sincerely, Sukh
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I really want to study but I’m too tired.

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