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The chart below show the changes that took place in three different areas of crime in New Port city center from 2003 to 2012. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart below show the changes that took place in three different areas of crime in New Port city center from 2003 to 2012. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The given line graph illustrates how many crimes happened in the centre of New Port over a period of 10 years between 2003 and 2012. Units are measured by number of incidents.
Overall
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, it can clearly be seen that
burglary
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 is the highest crime at the beginning of the period, but it changed to
car
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theft
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 in 2012. In terms of
burglary
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 as the biggest number of tragedies, started at almost 3.500, followed by
car
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theft
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 at around 2.750. In the next year,
burglary
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 increased slightly and reached a peak of approximately 3.750
while
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car
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theft
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 remained stable. From
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 year until 2008,
burglary
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 dropped dramatically to just precisely 1.200 and it was overtaken by
car
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theft
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 as the most frequent incident at over 2.000. From
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 point onwards, both
burglary
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 and
car
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theft
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 experienced a small incline and ended at almost 1.500 and 2.750, respectively. Regarding robbery, stood at over 500 and peaked at just under 1.000 after two years. In the remaining period, it still become the lowest incidents in the city of New Port and finished at clearly 750.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words burglary, car, theft with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "almost" was used 2 times.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • changes
  • took place
  • three different areas of crime
  • New Port city center
  • from 2003 to 2012
  • summarise
  • information
  • selecting
  • reporting
  • main features
  • comparisons
  • where relevant
  • overall
  • crime rates
  • downward trend
  • most significant drop
  • observed
  • theft
  • burglary
  • on the other hand
  • slight increase
  • drug-related offenses
  • same period
  • declined steadily
  • significant decrease
  • 10-year period
  • in contrast
  • slight decline
  • remaining years
  • violent crimes
  • relatively stable
  • slight fluctuation
  • conclusion
  • recorded
  • small increase
  • initially
  • then declined slightly
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