The chart below shows waste collection by a recycling center from 2011 to 2015.

The chart below shows waste collection by a recycling center from 2011 to 2015.
The bar chart compares the amount of waste collected by recycling
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in four different categories (
paper
,
glass
, tin, garden) between 2011 and 2015. Units are measured in
tons
.
Overall
, it is obviously seen that the most and the less recycled wastes are
paper
and garden respectively. In general, the total amount of collected waste increased in all categories during
this
4
years
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of
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period. In terms of
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recycles, it was exactly 57
tons
in
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the
begining
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beginning
of
recycling
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process
however
reached the top of all categories in 2015 with 70
tons
. The lowest collection of
paper
is observed in 2013 (40t
tons
) where the
glass
recycling put
paper
collection back with 48
tons
.
Therefore
,
glass
collection is the second most popular waste recycled in
this
period and the highest amount of
glass
collected is 52
tons
in 2015.
On the other hand
,
although
tins and garden wastes are not mostly preferred wastes compared to
the
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paper
and
glass
,
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Vocabulary: Replace the words paper, glass, tons with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Only 5 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: The word "compares" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 3 times.
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