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The chart below shows waste collection by a recycling center from 2011 to 2015.

The chart below shows waste collection by a recycling center from 2011 to 2015.
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The bar chart compares the amount of waste collected by recycling
center
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 in four different categories (
paper
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,
glass
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, tin, garden) between 2011 and 2015. Units are measured in
tons
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.
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, it is obviously seen that the most and the less recycled wastes are
paper
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 and garden respectively. In general, the total amount of collected waste increased in all categories during
this
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 4
years
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of
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period. In terms of
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paper based
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 recycles, it was exactly 57
tons
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in
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at
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 the
begining
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beginning
 of
recycling
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the recycling
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 process
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 reached the top of all categories in 2015 with 70
tons
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. The lowest collection of
paper
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 is observed in 2013 (40t
tons
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) where the
glass
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 recycling put
paper
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 collection back with 48
tons
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.
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,
glass
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 collection is the second most popular waste recycled in
this
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 period and the highest amount of
glass
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 collected is 52
tons
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 in 2015.
On the other hand
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,
although
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 tins and garden wastes are not mostly preferred wastes compared to
the
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paper
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 and
glass
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,

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Vocabulary: Replace the words paper, glass, tons with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Only 5 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: The word "compares" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 3 times.
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